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Ok i said i wasn't going to post out of order but I got 6 pages of this comic into my departments cartooning portfilio book and i thought i'd post them as they will be published on their own without the other 24 odd pages. I was disappointed they picked a section that had no really figures in it all 6 pages are swans and water so it looks like i don't do people when i do but it's not that big a deal. I'm also posting cus I'd like some feedback on the writing and the font i used. I'm not a writer and all comments on that would be very welcome [and spelling mistakes please point them out, i really can't spell at all!!]
the myth of the children of lir can be read here[link]
I've really gone off black and white work and want to silkscreen the whole comic in colour [couple of test pages from the comic can be found here[link] and here[link]
the myth of the children of lir can be read here[link]
I've really gone off black and white work and want to silkscreen the whole comic in colour [couple of test pages from the comic can be found here[link] and here[link]
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Great work with this! The inking illustration adds a bit of starkness to the story. I have to agree with the font, I am not wholly sold on it. It's very hard to read. It would be great to use for texture in the background and in larger font size for titles and stuff, but I would choose a much simpliar unical form to make the reading easier.